elementalv

Title: That NCIS Thing
Author: elementalv
Rating: PG
Characters: Gibbs/Abby
Notes: I started this a few months ago then kind of lost interest in NCIS. Ah well. It was fun while it lasted. Posted as part of wip_amnesty.

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( That NCIS Thing )

Title: “In January, It’s So Nice...”
Author: elementalv
Rating: G
Notes/Spoilers: A very brief Wee!chester based on a line from 5X13, “The Song Remains the Same”
Summary: Dean reads, Sam argues.

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( “In January It's So Nice...” )

This is actually something I can do that's relatively pain-free, now that my Web site is updated. Am I bragging about that? Um...yes. Not that I have much right to, considering it was my own fault it fell so far behind to begin with, but hell. It was a lot of work to get it updated, and even though I still need to do more work, the worst of it is over.

Note that the links below (38, all together, which is kind of weird, because I didn't think I was that productive in 2009) lead to Elemental Vision rather than to LJ or Dreamwidth. This is a mirror of a post at LJ.

2009 Fic Round-up

( Buffy: The Vampire Slayer )

( Crossovers )

( due South )

( Stargate: Atlantis )

( Supernatural )

What I really want to know is if anyone has written a genderfuck Supernatural with an always-gay Dean being inexplicably attracted to a Castiel who started out in a female vessel? If not, I think I want to write that.

Title: Getting A Word In Edgewise
Author: elementalv
Characters: Dean & Castiel and a few others
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Nothing specific, though it assumes knowledge of season 5 to date.
Notes: Gen, roughly 2,900 words or so.
Summary: They stumble across God at 4:16 on a Friday afternoon in a park that sits along the edge of Lake St. Clair.

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( Getting A Word In Edgewise )

Authors: elementalv and instantramen
Rating: Crack
Summary: It’s the end of the world as they know it
Pairings: Dean/Castiel, Sam/Michael, possibly others (the crack is still flowing)

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( To be named )

Title: Finding Vonnegut
Author: elementalv
Rating: PG
Notes: Gen, follows episode 5.2 — Good God, Y’All; 1,325 words.
Summary: Dean will deny it to his dying breath (and has, come to think of it), but the truth is that more than crappy motels even, libraries feel like home to him.

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( Finding Vonnegut )

At the moment, I'm reading Greywalker by Kat Richardson. It's urban fantasy, but more important, it's well-done urban fantasy. I'm not even 60 pages into it, and I already like the protagonist. I also like the writing, despite the first-person POV, because Richardson doesn't fall into the trap of having the character give random info dumps about herself.

Richardson maintains a true first-person POV, which means the character isn't really thinking about her physical appearance unless the action calls for it. For instance, we know the character is female at the start, only because her narrative reads, "I groped for my purse..." (a quibble: you're a P.I.; why the hell do you keep your gun in your purse?). Later in that same paragraph, we know she has long hair, but only because the guy she's fighting grabs her long ponytail. We don't even get the character's full name until she introduces herself to someone at the start of chapter 3. This is the way information should be presented in a first-person POV.

In contrast, we have Death's Daughter by Amber Benson, which starts with (the formatting is hers):

My name is Calliope Reaper-Jones, and I think I'm losing my mind.

Calliope goes on to describe her day job, her friends, the way her life works — it reads like a boring blog — instead of letting action tell the tale. Shortly thereafter, she goes into too much detail about the clothing she's about to put on, and while I can buy that to a certain extent as character development, overall, it fails. I, as a reader, don't give a shit what Calliope is wearing, especially with a dragon downstairs (yes, really, the info dump about her wardrobe comes after the realization there's a dragon downstairs). There are other problems with the writing, but the info dumps are my main gripe.

First-person POV is a tricky thing to write. You can't really include a physical description or history of your character unless the story goes there or someone else comments on it. Even if you have another character speaking, the commenting will be imprecise: "I know you want to be in a size 12, but face it: you're at least an 18. So quit bitching and get something that fits you for once." This sort of dialogue is useful in a first-person POV, not only for the description (we know the narrator is overweight) but also for what it tells us about the narrator's personality that we might not otherwise get: she's vain about her appearance and hates the fact that she has to wear larger clothes.

Anyway, this post started out as a recommendation for Greywalker and ended up veering off into personal pet peeves about first-person POV, so I apologize. That said, do give Richardson a shot. I'm only 60 pages into Greywalker, but I'm reasonably certain it will be good to the end. Her writing strikes me the same way Jim Butcher's does, which is as a solid piece of story-telling.

Words cannot express my full love for this remix of Buffy and Twilight. We're talking serious, full-on glomping kind of love.















FYI, I found this video courtesy of the OTW feed.

(crossposted to DW, LJ and IJ)