gah! Okay, I promise to get an open id account soon, or something, but until then, I still must MAKE COMMENT!
this is excellent, I love the way you develop incites into John's past, as well as your depiction of Carson in this. I can totally see Carson's stern disapproval, which is totally based around his inability to fix someone. :)
wonderful, should be continued. pull a cliche, get john put on atlantis as a civilian contractor (female!) but to be continued would be lovely.
although, I have grown as a person and am more then willing to love and accept this fic as it is, because it represents soo much and is complete in the possibilities that it represents. (yay!)
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this is excellent, I love the way you develop incites into John's past, as well as your depiction of Carson in this. I can totally see Carson's stern disapproval, which is totally based around his inability to fix someone. :)
wonderful, should be continued. pull a cliche, get john put on atlantis as a civilian contractor (female!) but to be continued would be lovely.
although, I have grown as a person and am more then willing to love and accept this fic as it is, because it represents soo much and is complete in the possibilities that it represents. (yay!)